Post-writting blog #2

So essay number two did not turn out as well as I had hoped. I know where my two main issues are; the length of my essay and the thesis paragrah. I need to do a better job of figuring out a claim so I can use that to help support a thesis. Once I get the thesis taken care of, I think that will just about solve my essay length problem as well. I also need to do a better job of not having my paper be so broad or ramble so much. I feel tend to that so I can help myself in reaching the word count goal. Essay number three seems to be coming along better, so hopefully I can save myself with this one. But only time can really tell!